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Pollution is becoming major environment problem .cause and sollution

Pollution is becoming major environment problem. cause and sollution Ky7PL
Pollution is rising day by day due to the cause of human activities. there are various factors and curb behind this notion. My standpoint will deciphered in the upcoming fragments. Commencing with the reasons. The conspicious factor is vehicles. Advanced technology is rising day by day. Everyone have a own vehicles. People prefer like to go outside by their vehicles. Many harmful gases released from transport modes which deplete the ozone layer and cause air pollution. In the contemporary era, people cut down tree for their own purpose, thus carbondioxide is inclining and oxygen is declining. As a result, people face problem while they breath. Moreover, which smog is released from refrigerator, ece and fridge also cause air pollution. Apart from it, people throw household wastage and garbage into the water and many dust particles are mixed with water. then occur water pollution. Waste material from factories, employee throw into water. Consequently, water is worse and this is not suitable for drinking because there are many chemical mixed with water. However, it should be tackle with different ways. Most importantly individuals grow more and more trees because due to this air pollution will declined. People feel free and comfortable in fresh air. Apart from this industries waste should throw outside the country and from that way persons prevent from diseases. In Conclusion, although pollution put highly bad impact on environment but it should measures with different solution such as growing tree and so on.
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Pollution
is rising day by day due to the cause of human activities.
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there
are various factors and curb behind this notion. My standpoint will
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deciphered
in the upcoming fragments.

Commencing with the reasons. The
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conspicious
factor is vehicles. Advanced technology is rising day by day. Everyone
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own
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vehicles
.
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People
prefer like to go outside by their vehicles.
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Many
harmful gases released from transport modes which deplete the ozone layer and cause
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air
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pollution
. In the contemporary era,
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people
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cut
down tree for their
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own
purpose,
thus
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carbondioxide
is inclining and oxygen is declining.
As a result
,
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people
face problem while they
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breath
.
Moreover
, which smog
is released
from refrigerator,
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ece
and fridge
also
cause
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air
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pollution
. Apart from it,
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people
throw household wastage and garbage into the
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water
and
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many
dust particles
are mixed
with
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water
.
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then
occur
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water
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pollution
. Waste material from factories, employee throw into
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water
.
Consequently
,
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water
is worse and this is not suitable for drinking
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because
there are
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many
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chemical
mixed with water.

However
, it should be tackle with
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different
ways. Most
importantly
individuals grow more and more trees
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because
due to this
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air
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pollution
will
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declined
.
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People
feel free and comfortable in fresh
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air
. Apart from this industries waste should throw outside the country and from that way persons
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prevent
from diseases.

In Conclusion
, although
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pollution
put
highly
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bad
impact on environment
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but
it should
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measures
with
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different
solution such as growing tree and
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on.
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IELTS essay Pollution is becoming major environment problem. cause and sollution

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
244 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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