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The figure illustrates how a wave-energy machine works and, also what are the possible location options for wave-energy machines to be installed. Overall, the wave-energy machine works with a spin of the turbine, which is a key component of the working structure. Proper flow of air generates an artificial wave using a wave-energy machine. The wave-energy machine is divided into two chambers, the top chamber, and the bottom chamber. The top chamber consists of a turbine which is attached to the electricity generator and vents which allow airflow. The bottom chamber consists of water of a certain level and an outlet to pass the wave. When the electricity generator is turned on, the turbine starts to spin, which lets the air flow from the top chamber to the bottom chamber that allows creating ample force to generate a wave. There are two vents present in the separation of two chambers horizontally which allows circulation of air in and out of the wave-energy machine. The wave-energy machine which is located closer to the shore produces low outputs as in smaller waves as compared to a wave-energy machine that is located much far away from the shore. But on other hand, it is cost-efficient to install a wave-energy machine closer to shore than deeper to the shore.
The figure illustrates how a wave-energy
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machine
works and,
also
what are the possible location options for wave-energy
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machines
to
be installed
.

Overall
, the wave-energy
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machine
works with a spin of the turbine, which is a key component of the working structure. Proper flow of air generates an artificial
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wave
using a wave-energy machine.

The wave-energy
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machine
is divided
into two
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chambers
, the top
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chamber
, and the bottom
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chamber
. The top
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chamber
consists of a turbine which
is attached
to the electricity generator and vents which
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allow
airflow.
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The
bottom
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chamber
consists of water of a certain level and an outlet to pass the
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wave
. When the electricity generator
is turned
on, the turbine
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starts
to spin, which
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lets
the air flow from the top
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chamber
to the bottom
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chamber
that
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allows
creating ample force to generate a
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wave
. There are two vents present in the separation of two
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chambers
horizontally
which
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allows
circulation of air in and out of the wave-energy machine.

The wave-energy
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machine
which
is located
closer to the
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shore
produces low outputs as in smaller
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waves
as compared to a wave-energy
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machine
that
is located
much far away from the
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shore
.
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But
on other hand, it
is cost
-efficient to install a wave-energy
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machine
closer to
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shore
than deeper to the
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shore
.
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IELTS essay the wave machine and its location

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
215 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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