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Technology has caused more problems than benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Undeniably, technology gaining considerable momentum in present day era and become modernized day- by- day. It is an irrefutable fact that machinery has both the positive as well as negative sides. However, I believe that technology give more downsides in every field than its efficacies. There are multifarious factors which will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs before any reasonable conclusion can be drawn.
Undeniably
, technology gaining considerable momentum in present day era and become modernized day- by- day. It is an irrefutable fact that machinery has both the
positive
as well as
negative
sides.
However
, I believe that technology give more downsides in every field than its
efficacies
. There are multifarious factors which will
be discussed
in the forthcoming paragraphs
before
any reasonable conclusion can
be drawn
.
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IELTS essay Technology has caused more problems than benefits.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
64 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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