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Technology has caused more problems than benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Undeniably, technology gaining considerable momentum in present day era and become modernized day- by- day. It is an irrefutable fact that machinery has both the positive as well as negative sides. However, I believe that technology give more downsides in every field than its efficacies. There are multifarious factors which will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs before any reasonable conclusion can be drawn.

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, technology gaining considerable momentum in present day era and become modernized day- by- day. It is an irrefutable fact that machinery has both the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
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negative
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IELTS essay Technology has caused more problems than benefits.

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