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The water is one of the most important natural resources in order to human life.

The water is one of the most important natural resources in order to human life. Some people believe that water should be freely accessible for everyone in the world, while others argue that it should be controlled by governments to ensure that available to everyone. I would argue that the water supply should be regulated by authorities for several reasons. On the one hand, the water is a precious natural resource and it is available in a large proportion of the planet. As a result, it should be free and everyone can access it to their daily needs and people could consume the amount of water that they needed because it is free of charge. Moreover, a large amount of water is being used in agriculture and industries to produce commodities, and therefore it should not be limited usable. For example, people who are doing farming needs the huge amount water and if governments control the utilization of water then farmers would not be able to compensate the water supply bills. Therefore, it will have a negative impact on the crop yield. On the other hand, the water system should be regulated by governments to make sure that available to their every citizen. There should be an authority to manage and control the water supply because some people may overuse it and other people could not access it. Moreover, the government should ensure that their people are accessing clean, safe drinking water and it helps to reduce the number of diseases that spread through the water such as cholera. In summary, I am inclined to believe that the water supply should be regulated by governments to ensure that it can be easily accessible to everyone, and it is safer and cleaner.
The
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important
natural resources in order to human life.
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Some
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people
believe that
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water
should be
freely
accessible for
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everyone
in the world, while others argue that it should
be controlled
by
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governments
to ensure that available to
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everyone
. I would argue that the
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water
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supply
should
be regulated
by authorities for several reasons.

On the one hand, the
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water
is a precious natural
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resource and
it is available in a large proportion of the planet.
As a result
, it should be free and
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everyone
can access it to their daily needs and
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people
could consume the amount of
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water
that they needed
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because
it is free of charge.
Moreover
, a large amount of
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water
is being
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used
in agriculture and industries to produce commodities, and
therefore
it should not
be limited
usable.
For example
,
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people
who are doing farming needs the huge amount
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water
and if
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governments
control the utilization of
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water
then farmers would not be able to compensate the
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water
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supply
bills.
Therefore
, it will have a
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negative
impact on the crop yield.

On the other hand
, the
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water
system should
be regulated
by
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governments
to
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make
sure that available to their every citizen. There should be an authority to manage and control the
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water
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supply
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because
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some
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people
may overuse it and other
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people
could not access it.
Moreover
, the
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government
should ensure that their
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people
are accessing clean, safe drinking
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water and
it
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helps
to
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reduce
the number of diseases that spread through the
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water
such as cholera.

In summary, I
am inclined
to believe that the
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water
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supply
should
be regulated
by
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governments
to ensure that it can be
easily
accessible to
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everyone
, and it is safer and cleaner.

IELTS essay The water is one of the most important natural resources in order to human life.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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