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Currently, cars have become a primar necessity in our day to day life, so their number have grown especially in metro cities.

Currently, cars have become a primar necessity in our day to day life, so their number have grown especially in metro cities. This essay below will discuss the number of problems associated with this phenomenon and put forward some solutions for the same. The first and foremost concern caused by the increase in the number of cars is traffic congestion in major cities. Hence, nowadays, cars have become more inexpensive and many people are buying them, so this turn leads to more traffic jams. Second major problem that caused by cars is air pollution which bring about catastrophic health hazards at a high rate. Air quality in metro cities has degraded so badly, correspondingly, it is very difficult to breathe in these urban areas. According to the statistics in Delhi in the year oc 2015 showed that the number of asthma patients had increased due to inapropriate oxygen rate.
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have become a
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primar
necessity in our
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day to day
life,
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their
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number
have grown
especially
in metro cities. This essay below will discuss the
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number
of problems associated with this phenomenon and put forward
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some
solutions for the same.

The
first
and foremost concern caused by the increase in the
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number
of
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cars
is traffic congestion in major cities.
Hence
, nowadays,
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cars
have become more inexpensive and
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many
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people
are buying them,
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so
this turn leads to more traffic jams. Second major problem that caused by
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cars
is air pollution which bring about catastrophic health hazards at a high rate. Air quality in metro cities has degraded
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so
badly
,
correspondingly
, it is
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very
difficult to breathe in these urban areas. According to the statistics in Delhi in the year
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oc
2015
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showed
that the
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number
of asthma patients had increased due to
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inapropriate
oxygen rate.

IELTS essay Currently, cars have become a primar necessity in our day to day life, so their number have grown especially in metro cities.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
149 words
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4.0
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