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The use of the internet advantages and disadvantages

The use of the internet advantages and disadvantages eRoEJ
Nowadays, the internet is widely used by students and other people as well, for educational purposes and other purposes. Taking into account the advantages and the disadvantages of the use of the internet, I would say not to have any restrictions on the internet at all. I believe that there are many negative effects of the internet, I suggest there should be prior knowledge of the harmful sides of the internet as well as educating the users about those effects the proper way to handle this issue is to have a self consciousness about it. However, some people argue that the benefits of the internet outweigh the disadvantages, hence it is not necessary to have limitations or restrictions on the internet.
Nowadays, the internet is
widely
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used
by students and other
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people
as well
, for educational purposes and other purposes. Taking into account the advantages and the disadvantages of the
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use
of the internet, I would say not to have any restrictions on the internet at all.

I believe that there are
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many
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negative
effects of the internet, I suggest there should be prior knowledge of the harmful sides of the internet
as well
as educating the users about those effects the proper way to handle this issue is to have a self consciousness about it.
However
,
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some
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people
argue that the benefits of the internet outweigh the disadvantages,
hence
it is not necessary to have limitations or restrictions on the internet.

IELTS essay The use of the internet advantages and disadvantages

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2 paragraphs
121 words
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