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Is televised talent a good method?

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In my opinion, television programs in general are one of the best ways to introduce talented people, and since a wide range of people listen to such programs, it is important that the Islamic Republic of Iran Broadcasting can also be in this field. Produce more programs like "New Age". I agree that using the TV space to introduce the talents of Iran and the world is very good, but other ways should not be neglected. However, even cyberspace can not cover this wide range like radio and television. Finally, I must point out that today, with the creation of digital and electronic methods that can remotely control everything, traditional methods are no longer widely used, and I completely agree with the introduction of successful and talented people on television.
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IELTS essay Is televised talent a good method?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
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