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The use of illegal drugs such as heroine and cocane are becoming more common in many countries. What are the effects and possible solutions?

The use of illegal drugs such as heroine and cocane are becoming more common in many countries. What are the effects and possible solutions? 9Omr
It is being witnessed that the consumption of illegal drugs such as heroin and cocane are becoming more increased at alarming rate in many nations. This essay examines the impacts caused by drug use in society and suggest some key remedies to combat this problem. One predomint effect behind including rate of synthetic drugs is that a number of drug consumers take drug recklessly so that it effects to their health. As, they get invitation to many health problems like lung cancer, asthma and many more. Another impact is that when people consuming drugs limitlessly they often become irrational which leads to violation of relationships and set bag to dignity. For example, a news published in newspaper, "The Turbine "revealed that, in Chandigarh number of person took drug rashly due to overdose of many drugs. It addicted have lost their life. In order to tackle this issues, there are various ways to decreasing the drug rate in many countries. First of all, academic teachers should provide the knowledge to students about drugs in schools and universities. It will assist to overcome this issue. Apart from that, it is responsibility of their government that they should implement rules and regulations to decreased drugs in countries. For instance, drug peddlers should be arrested and payed huge fine to authorities due to this they have fear to sell drugs and it helps to declining the rate of drugs in society. Summing up, although, drugs is deep- root issue, yet, by working shoulder to shoulder this can be fixed and it is very beneficial to become a better future.
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that the consumption of illegal
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drugs
such as heroin and
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cocane
are becoming more increased at alarming
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rate
in
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many
nations. This essay examines the impacts caused by
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drug
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use
in society and suggest
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some
key remedies to combat this problem.

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predomint
effect behind including
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rate
of synthetic
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drugs
is that a number of
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drug
consumers take
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drug
recklessly
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so
that it effects to their health. As, they
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get
invitation to
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many
health problems like lung cancer, asthma and
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many
more. Another impact is that when
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people
consuming
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drugs
limitlessly
they
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often
become irrational which leads to violation of relationships and set bag to dignity.
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,
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a news
published in newspaper,
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The Turbine
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"
revealed that, in Chandigarh number of person took
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drug
rashly
due to overdose of
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many
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drugs
. It addicted have lost their
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life
.

In order to tackle this issues, there are various ways to decreasing the
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drug
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rate
in
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many
countries.
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First of all
, academic teachers should provide the knowledge to students about
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drugs
in schools and universities. It will assist to overcome this issue. Apart from that, it is responsibility of their
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government
that they should implement
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rules
and regulations to decreased
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drugs
in countries.
For instance
,
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drug
peddlers should
be arrested
and
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payed
huge fine to authorities due to this they have fear to sell
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drugs
and it
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helps
to declining the
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rate
of
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drugs
in society.

Summing up, although,
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drugs
is deep- root issue,
yet
, by working shoulder to shoulder this can be
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fixed
and it is
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very
beneficial to become a better future.
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IELTS essay The use of illegal drugs such as heroine and cocane are becoming more common in many countries. What are the effects and possible solutions?

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265 words
6.0
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