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The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems discuss causes and solutions

The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems discuss causes and solutions pJQ73

The trend of using cars has been becoming a grave metter of concern, in recent years which is burgeoning at an alarming rate. Two primary causative factor such as global warming and increasing the level of road accidents can be attributed this phenomenon; however, government can play a vital role to fix it exponentially. One of the most obvious culprit is that rising the global warming due to the excessive use of cars. To be more precise, in this time and age people give neither preference to bicycle nor walking as compared to automobiles.

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 of concern, in recent years which is burgeoning at an alarming rate. Two primary causative Possible agreement error. The noun 'factor' seems to be countable, so consider using: "factors".factors
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 such as global warming and increasing the level of road accidents can be attributed
 this phenomenon; however
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government
 can play a vital role to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 it exponentially
.

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 is that rising the global warming due to the excessive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of cars. To be more precise, in this time and age This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 give neither preference to bicycle nor walking as compared to automobiles. 