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The ugly truth of me in entire life

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The Ugly Truth It was on a beautiful day. My friends and I planned to go to Can Tho city to play, we traveled by motorbike and that day became an unforgettable day in our hearts. Along the way, I accidentally discovered a puppy lying along the curb, surprised by that, so we stopped and came to see the dog's situation. As soon as I came over, I saw the dog was motionless for a while, so I thought he was dead. Then I searched for a newspaper enough big to bring the dog to the pavement. As soon as I touched him, he suddenly woke up and from somewhere his mother came to bark at us, we climbed into the motorbike and ran as fast as possible. Sometimes good work also brings bad luck to you.
The Ugly Truth

It was on a
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beautiful
day. My friends and I planned to go to Can Tho city to play, we traveled by motorbike and that day became an unforgettable day in our hearts. Along the way, I
accidentally
discovered a puppy lying along the curb, surprised by that,
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so
we
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stopped
and came to
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see
the dog's situation. As
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soon
as I came over, I
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saw
the dog was motionless for a while,
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so
I
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thought
he was dead. Then I searched for a newspaper
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enough
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big
to bring the dog to the pavement. As
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soon
as I touched him, he
suddenly
woke up and from somewhere his mother came to bark at us, we climbed into the motorbike and ran as
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fast
as possible.
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Sometimes
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good
work
also
brings
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bad
luck to you.
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IELTS essay The ugly truth of me in entire life

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
137 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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