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Smoking should be banned in public areas. Describe

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Nowadays, there can be seen an augment in the interest of smoking in all places, especially among the young generation. In my take, there are many disadvantages of smoking whether it is in public place or in private place. To begin with, Non-smokers can lead to harmful disease because of the harmful precipitates of the smoke and the ash of the ciggarettes. If the person is smoking in a public it can directly harm the health of a person who is around. Furthermore, according to the study, it has been discovered that, there are many chances of having a disease to person who doesn't smoke and have a problem with the smoke rather than the person who smoke because a smoking person is habitual of the smoke so that non-smoker's who are not habitual to the smoke. For example, if the person is smoking in a public park, there maybe many people around their including young and elderly people, patients and also there maybe some animals. The smoke of ciggarettes can be spread and can be inahkes by many people and animals. Secondly, the infectious disease can be spread easily to anyone. Even if they are smoking in a private place the smoke can be outspreaded anywhere. Moreover, the smoke with the viral diseases not only damages the body of the smoker, but also results in unfavourable outcome in the surrounding people. To exemplify, if the smoker is suffering from a viral diseases which can be spreaded by the breathe than the viral diseases can catch anyone near the smoker. In my conclusion, taking this into consideration, the smoking should be prohibited in the public places as it can harm many people and animals.
Nowadays, there can be
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an augment
in the interest of
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smoking
in all
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places
,
especially
among the young generation.

In my take, there are
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many
disadvantages of
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smoking
whether it is in
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public
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place
or in private place.

To
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begin
with, Non-smokers can lead to harmful
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disease
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because
of the harmful precipitates of the
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smoke
and the ash of the
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ciggarettes
. If the
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person
is
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smoking
in a
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public
it can
directly
harm the health of a
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person
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who
is around.
Furthermore
, according to the study, it has
been discovered
that, there are
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many
chances of having a
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disease
to
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person
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who
doesn't
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smoke
and have a problem with the
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smoke
rather
than the
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person
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who
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smoke
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a
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smoking
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person
is habitual of the
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smoke
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so
that non-smoker's
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who
are not habitual to the
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smoke
.
For example
, if the
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person
is
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smoking
in a
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public
park, there maybe
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many
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people
around their including young and elderly
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people
, patients and
also
there maybe
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some
animals. The
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smoke
of
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ciggarettes
can
be spread
and can be
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inahkes
by
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many
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people
and animals.

Secondly
, the infectious
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disease
can
be spread
easily
to anyone.
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Even if
they are
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smoking
in a private
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place
the
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smoke
can be
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outspreaded
anywhere.
Moreover
, the
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smoke
with the viral
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diseases
not
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damages the body of the smoker,
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also
results in
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unfavourable
outcome in the surrounding
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people
. To exemplify, if the smoker is suffering from a viral
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diseases
which can be
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spreaded
by the
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breathe
than the viral
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diseases
can catch anyone near the smoker.

In my conclusion, taking this into consideration, the
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smoking
should
be prohibited
in the
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public
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places
as it can harm
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many
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people
and animals.
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IELTS essay Smoking should be banned in public areas. Describe

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284 words
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