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The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. ypgl
The education system is improving digitally now-a-days. To raise up an education quality authorities have looked for new techniques to alternate outdated works. To the best of my knowledge, the traditional teaching of teacher and student in the class will continue till 2050 although the benefits of new technology are improving. The first reason is that teacher not only plays an important role to impart knowledge but also educate morality to students. The typical form of education is quite popular in many countries from ancient times. This will assist children learning discipline and repect other fellows besides education. The place of an education system is growing and adapting, i. e. , they are accepting virtual education system. Over the past decade, 50% of the schools are offering online system and it will be 100% by the end of the next decade. Now-a-days universities offer computers, labs, practical sessions for better understanding of subjects. In some scenerios, the student and teacher are mostly-liked unchanged for possible next decades. For example, teachers ask the students to do homework regularly, checks the assessement and with regular examinations. This will help the teachers to personally monitor sudents about behaviour with collics and elder people. While learning in the class we can attend grop discussions, learns something from other fellows. This helps us to increases the communication of how to speak where we can attend seminar fluently and without fear. In conclusion, the teaching in the class should exist till 2050 because this will help the student not only learn about education but aslo moralities. However, In my view combining the traditional and new methodsd leads in improving education system.
The
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is improving
digitally
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now
-a-days. To raise up an
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quality authorities have looked for new techniques to alternate outdated works. To the best of my knowledge, the traditional teaching of
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teacher
and
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student
in the
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class
will continue till 2050 although the benefits of new technology are improving.

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reason is that
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not
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plays an
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role to impart knowledge
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but
also
educate morality to
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students
. The typical form of
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education
is quite popular in
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many
countries from ancient times. This will assist children learning discipline and
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repect
other fellows
besides
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education
. The place of an
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system
is growing and adapting,
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,
they are accepting virtual
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education
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. Over the past decade, 50% of the schools are offering online
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and it will be 100% by the
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of the
next
decade.
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Now
-a-days universities offer computers, labs, practical sessions for better understanding of subjects.

In
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scenerios
, the
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and
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are
mostly
-liked unchanged for possible
next
decades.
For example
,
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teachers
ask the
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students
to do homework
regularly
,
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checks
the
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assessement
and with regular examinations. This will
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help
the
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to
personally
monitor
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sudents
about
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behaviour
with
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collics
and elder
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people
. While learning in the
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class
we can attend
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grop
discussions, learns something from other fellows. This
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helps
us to increases the communication of how to speak where we can attend seminar
fluently
and without fear.

In conclusion
, the teaching in the
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class
should exist till 2050
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because
this will
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help
the
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student
not
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learn about
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education
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but
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aslo
moralities.
However
, In my view combining the traditional and new
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leads in improving
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.
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IELTS essay The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
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