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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.

As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. OaEN

Nobody can argue that the acquisition of knowledge is more fun and easier with computers. The mere activity of touching and exploring this device constitutes an enjoyable task for a kid. This, accompanied with the relaxing attitude and software interactivity, usually conduce to a better grasping of new knowledge. At a higher educational level; the availability of digital books, simulator and other academic materials, provide the student with an ever accessible source of information, that otherwise would not be at hand. But, besides the increasing complexity and behavior of intelligent software, which is usually embedded in the academic digital material, the need of human interaction in the learning process will always be present, at least in the foreseeable future. There is the necessity for a human being to be able to determine what the specifics needs of each individual are. The expertise of a teacher in how to explain and adapt complex concepts to different individuals can hardly be mimicked by a computer, no matter how sophisticated its software is. As computers are becoming a common tool for teaching, teachers should be more aware of their role as guides in the acquisition of knowledge rather than transmitters of facts. They have to be open minded to the changes that are taking places, keep updated and serve as a problem solvers in the learning process, thus allowing students to discover the fact for themselves. To summarize, in my personal view, teachers play and will() play an important role in the classroom, especially at the primary level. No matter how complex computers become, there will be no replacement for the human interaction, but in the way haw this interaction takes place.

Nobody can argue that the acquisition of knowledge is more fun and easier with

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computers
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enjoyable
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accompanied with
 the relaxing attitude and software

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterInteractivity
interactivity
, usually
 conduce to a better grasping of new knowledge. At a higher educational level; the availability of digital books, simulator and other academic materials, provide the student with an ever accessible source of information, that otherwise
 would not be at hand.

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But
, besides
 the increasing complexity and behavior of intelligent software, which is

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usually
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needs
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individual
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explain
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concepts


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different
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 by a computer, no matter how

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sophisticated
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As computers are becoming a common tool for teaching, teachers should be more aware

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of
 their role as guides in the acquisition of knowledge rather
 than transmitters of facts.

They This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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open minded
 to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
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keep
 updated and

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serve
 as a problem solvers in the learning process, thus
 allowing students to discover the fact for themselves.

To summarize
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important
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classroom
, especially
 at the primary level. No matter how complex computers become,

there will be no replacement for the human interaction, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in the way haw this interaction takes place. 