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The two rendered illustrations delineate the information about accessible roads to the medical center from a city in 2007 and in 2010.

The two rendered illustrations delineate the information about accessible roads to the medical center from a city in 2007 and in 2010. L9WxR

The two rendered illustrations delineate the information about accessible roads to the medical center from a city in 2007 and in 2010. At a glance, there was a way to better hospitality in 2010 as compared to 2007. It is apparently seen that parking for staff and public both have been separated in 2010 and public car parking was constructed at the east of the hospital. However, former parking, which was used for both, has been allocated to only for staff members. Moreover, the bus stop was removed from its actual location in 2007. In addition, the new station for the bus was established, which is on the west side of the hospital and the opposite side of staff parking, in 2010. Along with it, roundabouts was built and also connected to the bus station and city roads, which will help to reduce traffic issue in front of the hospital. Overall, there were not many changes in 2010 as compared with 2007, except two new roundabouts and the replacement of bus stops by a bus station.

The two rendered illustrations delineate the information about accessible roads to the medical center from a city in 2007 and in 2010. At a glance, there was a way to better hospitality in 2010 as compared to 2007.

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, in 2010. Along with it, roundabouts was built
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