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the compare and comtrast of high school and university

the compare and comtrast of high school and university 5LVlm
The two levels of education, high school and university, are vastly different. Homework, tuition, and scholarships are examples of these variances. This essay compares the two and selects the best viewpoint. To begin with, college professors don't care if you are in class or if you do your homework, and if you aren't present or don't do your homework, you will receive an immediate fail score. Furthermore, if you work hard in university, you will be awarded many scholarships, which will help you pay for tuition and a job. Teachers in high school, on the other hand, are constantly checking your attendance. If you miss too many days, you may fail; yet, if you comply and work hard, you can still earn great grades. Studying in a high school, on the other hand, is a different story.
The two levels of education, high school and university, are
vastly
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different
. Homework, tuition, and scholarships are examples of these variances. This essay compares the two and selects the best viewpoint.

To
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begin
with, college professors don't care if you are in
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class
or if you do your homework, and if you aren't present or don't do your homework, you will receive an immediate fail score.
Furthermore
, if you work
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hard
in university, you will
be awarded
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many
scholarships, which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you pay for tuition and a job.

Teachers in high school,
on the other hand
, are
constantly
checking your attendance. If you miss too
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
days, you may fail;
yet
, if you comply and work
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
, you can
still
earn great grades. Studying in a high school,
on the other hand
, is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
story.
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IELTS essay the compare and comtrast of high school and university

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
137 words
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