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The two illustration show the changes of Grange Park from 1920 to today.

The two illustration show the changes of Grange Park from 1920 to today. GKxo

The two illustration show the changes of Grange Park from 1920 to today. This report will describe these changes. A few elements of the original planning remain in the same place consequently with that today is structure. However, some ancient components were removed and replaced with the new ones to make the park more interesting. The Grange Parker opened in 1920, and it was accessible via two entrance: One on the north in Arnold Avenue and the order on the south in Eldon Street. A fountain was built in the centre of the park, while on the left side was placed a stage for musicians. Next to the both the entrance the rose gardeners was the construct with that seats nearby them, to allow people to smell the flower and enjoy the music. On the north-easter it could be found in a port for the water plan and opposite they have it in a glasshouse was set up. Today ornament the modifications of the place appeared to be evident. The fountain has been replaced with a square Rose Garden with seats on both side. The other Rose Gardens of the original planning have been removed, except for the one on the north-west. This stage is for musicians has been improved to Amphitheater for a concert during the restyling. The new elements have added to the park, to permit families to spend a day in there. On the north-easter of the park where it has placed the children area and the café on its left side. A new entrance for underground and car park on the south-east and on the left a Water feature replace the Glasshouse.

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 to smell the flower and enjoy the music. On the north-easter it could be found
 in a port for the water plan and opposite they have it in a glasshouse was set
 up.

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 ornament the modifications of the place appeared to be evident. The fountain has been replaced
 with a square Rose Garden with seats on both side. The other Rose Gardens of the original planning have been removed
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