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The traffic situation in Dhaka is deteriorating.To improve this situation, rickshaws should be banned. To what extent do you agree to this statement?

The traffic situation in Dhaka is deteriorating. To improve this situation, rickshaws should be banned. 1bK7W
Dhaka city faces a lot of traffic congestions, and this problem is becoming worse with every passing day; hence, a rickshaw ban has been suggested to help improve this situation. However, I am strongly opposed to the rickshaw ban as I feel that the main reasons behind the traffic congestions are poor management and lack of traffic regulations. Firstly, the rickshaw is very efficient for short distance commute. These three wheelers are available at almost every residential area at affordable fares, and these are very popular among commuters. In fact, even car users tend to take advantage of rickshaws when they go out for short distance visits, as the traffic situation of the city is so bad that they would have wasted a lot of time stuck in traffic. Secondly, Dhaka is an overpopulated megacity, which is full of small narrow roads. To make matters worse, there is a lack of parking space, so many cars just park on the side of the street, causing traffic jams. Therefore, rickshaws are a better choice for travelling in these places as their compact shape allows them to navigate these places easily. On the other hand, proponents of the rickshaw ban believe that banning these vehicles will improve traffic conditions. However, I would argue that the main reason of traffic in Dhaka city is poor road management and policy. To illustrate, this city has exceeded its capacity for motor vehicles, yet a certain demographic tends to buy large cars, which is the main cause of traffic. In addition, rickshaws are not even allowed on the main roads, yet we can see a lot of traffic in these places due to the overuse of motor vehicles. Hence, banning the rickshaw will not have much effect. To conclude, banning the rickshaw will not have a positive effect as most commuters rely on it for short distance transport. Therefore, I would recommend the authorities to look at alternative solutions, such as reducing the number of motor vehicles in the city.
Dhaka city faces
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a lot of
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traffic
congestions, and this problem is becoming worse with every passing day;
hence
, a
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rickshaw
ban has
been suggested
to
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help
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improve
this situation.
However
, I am
strongly
opposed to the
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rickshaw
ban as I feel that the
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main
reasons behind the
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traffic
congestions are poor management and lack of
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traffic
regulations.

Firstly
, the
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rickshaw
is
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very
efficient for short distance commute. These three
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wheelers
are available at almost every residential area at affordable fares, and these are
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very
popular among commuters. In fact, even car users tend to take advantage of
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rickshaws
when they go out for short distance visits, as the
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traffic
situation of the city is
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so
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bad
that they would have wasted
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a lot of
time stuck in traffic.

Secondly
, Dhaka is an overpopulated
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megacity
, which is full of
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small
narrow roads. To
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make
matters worse, there is a lack of parking space,
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so
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many
cars
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just
park on the side of the street, causing
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traffic
jams.
Therefore
,
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rickshaws
are a better choice for travelling in these places as their compact shape
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allows
them to navigate these places
easily
.

On the other hand
, proponents of the
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rickshaw
ban believe that banning these
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vehicles
will
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improve
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traffic
conditions.
However
, I would argue that the
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main
reason of
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traffic
in Dhaka city is poor road management and policy. To illustrate, this city has exceeded its capacity for motor
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vehicles
,
yet
a certain demographic tends to
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buy
large cars, which is the
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main
cause of
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traffic
.
In addition
,
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rickshaws
are not even
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allowed
on the
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main
roads,
yet
we can
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see
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a lot of
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traffic
in these places due to the overuse of motor
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vehicles
.
Hence
, banning the
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rickshaw
will not have much effect.

To conclude
, banning the
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rickshaw
will not have a
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positive
effect as most commuters rely on it for short distance transport.
Therefore
, I would recommend the authorities to look at alternative solutions, such as reducing the number of motor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicles
in the city.
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IELTS essay The traffic situation in Dhaka is deteriorating. To improve this situation, rickshaws should be banned.

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