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The town council is running a competition entitled "The house I like most in my neighbourhood"

The town council is running a competition entitled "The house I like most in my neighbourhood" aEBdX
The best of the houses I like is my neighbor's house. Located near the city centre this house is delightful comfortable and very beatiful. Exept it is a large and surrounded by a high wall. I think there are many rooms, 3 living rooms, 5 dining rooms, 2 kitchens, 2 baths and WSs and others. Because it has two floors which is all the family live together. Theirs living and dining rooms are simple so with basic furnitures like a long soft sofas, larga armchairs and etc. As well as it is a big wooden house surounded by a green garden and colourful flowers. Besides at the back of the house has various different trees and plants: For instans sweet and juice tropical fruits, apples, piers and grapes and etc. In addition the reason for I like it that is a very quietly and brightly house even through it is close to the sity.
The best of the
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I like is my neighbor's
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house
. Located near the city
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this
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house
is delightful comfortable and
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beatiful
.
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it is a large and surrounded by a high wall. I
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there are
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, 3 living
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, 5 dining
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, 2 kitchens, 2 baths and
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WSs
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and others
.
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it has two floors which is all the family
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are simple
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with basic
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furnitures
like a long soft
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,
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house
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surounded
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at the back of the
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house
has various
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trees and plants: For
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instans
sweet and juice tropical fruits, apples, piers and grapes
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the reason for I like it
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IELTS essay The town council is running a competition entitled "The house I like most in my neighbourhood"

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
154 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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