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the system used for rubbish

the system used for rubbish NVL6q
I’m writing to let you know that, I’m living in the north central area of city where collecting process of wasted items do not happen correctly. Council vehicles are supposed to come and pick the all items on daily basis from houses where council’s works are not practicing and do not cover the sub roads as well. The community in the area including my family are not happy about your service. This issue has been affected extremely badly to our regular life since garbage has been piled up in everywhere. Therefore, bad smell comes from the particular locations where council urgent attention is required in order to solve this problem. Considering the above fact, we would really appreciate if you could make an arrangement to introduce a proper mechanism to garbage collection operation where people in the area will be informed the collection dates in advance via the SMS
I’m writing to
let
you know that, I’m living in the north central area of city where collecting process of wasted items do not happen
correctly
. Council vehicles
are supposed
to
come
and pick the all items on daily basis from
houses
where council’s works are not practicing and do not cover the sub roads
as well
.

The community in the area including my family are not happy about your service. This issue has been
affected
extremely
badly
to our regular life since garbage has
been piled
up in everywhere.
Therefore
,
bad
smell
comes
from the particular locations where council urgent attention
is required
in order to solve this problem.

Considering the above fact, we would
really
appreciate if you could
make
an arrangement to introduce a proper mechanism to garbage collection operation where
people
in the area will
be informed
the collection dates in advance via the SMS
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IELTS essay the system used for rubbish

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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