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A travel magazine is running competition and has asked its readers to sumbit description of a place they think is ideal for holidays.

A travel magazine is running competition and has asked its readers to sumbit description of a place they think is ideal for holidays. dqgJ2

I would choose the seaside as the ideal place for a vocation, because firstly it locatet far from city, then there are'nt hustle and bustle, crowded streets, car horns beeping whether hurrying passers by. I think almost everybody likely wont to go there, so the icy cold air blew around the coast, crystol- clear water fresh scent of pines' so with it is treatmented allergic disease. Another widely it is very useful for the human body to swimming salty sea water then lie down burning sand. In my opinion as you go there might sea swaying, palm sea, a various sea and wild animals, shrill eries of tropical birds. If we all choose there, I believe to enjoy on holiday.

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