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the topic is too short this time

the topic is too short this time 6a5OW
The diagnostic test was one of the most difficult exams I have taken, I thought It would be easy, but it was difficult to answer, I consider the limited time as one of my weaknesses by the fact I always get stressed, anyway I enjoy taking the exam in my home, I felt comfortable and it was a positive factor that helped me. The most difficult tasks were the ones where I had to write a certain number of words and the others in which I had to talk on unfamiliar topics. I agree with the score band I obtained in the first exams, in the other hand I would like to improve my speaking skill because it is the most difficult skill to me, I tend to be afraid of speaking with people I don’t know and it will be better If I get used to, I hope I can get better results If I continue practicing by my own because I really want to take the IELTS exam in the future.
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to answer, I consider the limited time as one of my weaknesses by the fact I always
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, anyway I enjoy taking the exam in my home, I felt comfortable and it was a
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The most
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tasks were the ones where I had to write a certain number of words and the others in which I had to talk on unfamiliar topics. I
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agree
with the score band I obtained in the
first
exams, in the other hand I would like to
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improve
my speaking
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skill
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because
it is the most
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difficult
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to me, I tend to be afraid of speaking with
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people
I don’t know and it will be better If I
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get
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to, I hope I can
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better results If I continue practicing by my
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want to take the IELTS exam in the future.
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IELTS essay the topic is too short this time

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
173 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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