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People living in the city face many problem what are the problems should the government to increase people to live in regional towns

People living in the city face many problem what are the problems should the government to increase people to live in regional towns LbNM6

Certainly it is true that everyone prefer to settle in metropole in many nation, but they face several issue in day to day life for the survival. I support the suggestion that state should encourage people to live in regional Towns. My view are supported in detail further There are several issues faced by the layman in urban area. The most preponderant one is that overpopulation. cities are usually crowded by people. Not only measure of them are in search of food but also there is an major threat of unemployment. Owing to this Metropolitans are not able to fulfill their family requirement. Moreover lack of space and inflation in daily amenities is intricate for them. To exampilify the cost of accommodation is very high in Megapolis. As a result although they have to work hard yet they do not get proper wage As i mentioned I agree to laid suggestion government should encourage people to migrate far from City. The foremost advantage is stable in population in urban area. Moreover, state should provide free education, better Lifestyle, proper road service to the layman. Who are migrating from the cities to another is regional area. By this i mean control of population is also lead to better atmosphere and less pollution spread by city dweller. Therefore government should convine the citizen to settle in different region Thus it can be seemed from the above discussion that there are several threat encountered by people in city. however, some products step should be taken by government to encourage them to shift. That is providing better opportunity for employment as well as education and basic aminities in rural area.

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metropole
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many nation
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but
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several issue
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people
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live
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area
. The most preponderant one is that overpopulation. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCities
cities
 are usually
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people
. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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but
also
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an
 major threat of unemployment. Owing to Did you mean "these"?these
this
 Metropolitans are not able to fulfill their family requirement. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 lack of space and inflation in daily amenities is intricate for them. To Possible spelling mistake found.exemplify
exampilify
 the cost of accommodation is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 high in Megapolis. As a result
 although they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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hard
yet
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get
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wage


“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 mentioned I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 to laid suggestion This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should encourage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to migrate far from City. The foremost advantage is stable in population in urban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. Moreover
, state should provide free education, better Lifestyle, proper road service to the layman. “Who” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Who
 are migrating from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 to another is regional You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. By this Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 mean control of population is also
Consider using a past participle here: "leaded", "led".leadedled
lead
 to better atmosphere and less pollution spread by city dweller. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should Possible spelling mistake found.convinceconfineconvenecon vine
convine
 the citizen to settle in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 region Thus
 it can be seemed
 from the above discussion that there are Possible agreement error. The noun threat seems to be countable; consider using: "several threats".several threats
several threat
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people
 in city. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHowever
however
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 products step should be taken
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government
 to encourage them to shift. That is
 providing better opportunity for employment as well
 as education and basic Possible spelling mistake found.amenities
aminities
 in rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. 