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dO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE FOLLOWING STATEMENT? THE TOEFL TEST IS A WONDERFUL TEST! USE REASONS AND EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT YOUR RESPONSE.

THE TOEFL TEST IS A WONDERFUL TEST! USE REASONS AND EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT YOUR RESPONSE. 56NbP
I firmly agree that the TOEFL test is a wonderful test. Although, personally I believe some drawbacks of the test can not be denied completely, still it is an acceptable test that forecasts our ability to read, write, speak and write in English in academic settings in future. Definitely since I've started practicing for the test, it has changed my perspective towards english language due to the minuscule details that I used to ignore earlier. In addition, I had never used my minute observation for the day to day conversation before preparing for the test, which is an eye opener for me to change my way of communication. First of all, the test is divided into four components and all the sections expect different kinds of performances from the test takers, which is very unique from the conventional tests of languages. I like the independent sections that gives the opportunity to speak or write based on our own experiences. However, the other parts of the test requires us to pace ourselves to express others' ideas within a time limit. But I believe the fascinating things in those parts help us to adapt to the real life situations while interacting with the native speakers. I had a very different notion about the TOEFL test earlier, but with minute observation and after constantly working on the vocabulary and the accent I am able to communicate in a better organized way. Secondly, it is a test to examine your patience and attention in a peculiar way. I can see the difference in my attention span with regular practice of the test. From my propensity, success is impossible in this test without a strong attention to read and listen for a major part of the test. Even a small distraction can miss out a vital point of the lecture. As a result, not did I only try to pay full attention but also I worked hard to enhance it through meditation and practice of listening for a long time. In a nutshell, I accept the test to be wonderful because I can see the improvement in people taking the test that is a requirement in everyday interaction with native people. Furthermore, it helped me to improve my communication style that I came to know from the complements by friends every now and then. So, I would say it is different from any other tests that makes it wonderful.
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drawbacks of the
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can not
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still
it is an acceptable
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that forecasts our ability to read, write, speak and write in English in academic settings
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practicing for the
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, it has
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changed
my perspective towards
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english
language due to the minuscule
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details
that I
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to
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earlier.
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used
my minute observation for the
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day to day
conversation
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before
preparing for the
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, which is an
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eye opener
for me to
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change
my way of communication.

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, the
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is divided
into four components and all the sections
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expect
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different
kinds of performances from the
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takers, which is
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very unique
from the conventional
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tests
of languages. I like the independent sections that gives the opportunity to speak or write based on our
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own
experiences.
However
, the other parts of the
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requires us to pace ourselves to express others'
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ideas
within a time limit.
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But
I believe the fascinating things in those parts
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help
us to adapt to the real life situations while interacting with the native speakers. I had a
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very
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different
notion about the TOEFL
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earlier,
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but
with minute observation and after
constantly
working on the vocabulary and the accent I am able to communicate in a better organized way.

Secondly
, it is a
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test
to examine your patience and
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attention
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in a peculiar way
. I can
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see
the difference in my
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attention
span with regular practice of the
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test
. From my propensity, success is impossible in this
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test
without a strong
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attention
to read and listen for a major part of the
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test
. Even a
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small
distraction can miss out a vital point of the lecture.
As a result
, not did I
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try to pay full
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also
I worked
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to enhance it through meditation and practice of listening for a long time.

In a nutshell, I accept the
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to be wonderful
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I can
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the improvement in
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people
taking the
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that is
a requirement in everyday interaction with native
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people
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, it
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now
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IELTS essay THE TOEFL TEST IS A WONDERFUL TEST! USE REASONS AND EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT YOUR RESPONSE.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
404 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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