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The passage describes the design and mostly about the construction of the Sydney Opera house, which the lecturer points out to be a very small reference of the internationally popular architecture. According to the lecture the Sydney opera house is a unique modern design of a building at that time. The architect Jorn Utzon has designed it with clean geometrical lines that provide an ornamental look to the Opera house. He has applied his imagination and built the opera house with the help of newer machineries which we can see from the international style of the skyscraper. Secon. . .
The passage
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describes
the design and
mostly
about the construction of the Sydney
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Opera
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house
, which the lecturer points out to be a
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very
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small
reference of the
internationally
popular architecture.

According to the lecture the Sydney
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opera
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house
is a unique modern design of a building at that time. The architect
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Jorn
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Utzon
has designed it with clean geometrical lines that provide an ornamental look to the
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Opera
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house
. He has applied his imagination and built the
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opera
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house
with the
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help
of newer
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machineries
which we can
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see
from the international style of the skyscraper.

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Secon
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IELTS essay Sydney opera house-

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
100 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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