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THE TENDENCY FOR HUMAN BEINGS TO COPY ONE ANOTHER IS SHOWN IN THE POPULARITY OF FASHIONS IN CLOTHES AND OTHER GOODS.

THE TENDENCY FOR HUMAN BEINGS TO COPY ONE ANOTHER IS SHOWN IN THE POPULARITY OF FASHIONS IN CLOTHES AND OTHER GOODS. rGVO2
In this materialistic era the trend of western culture on peak due to this people try to adopt their trend no doubt it increases the mindset of a person and able him / her to run with current affairs and this also increase the popularity of other commodities i agree with this statement futher i will articulate my points of view on forthcoming paragraphs At the very outset there are myriad of evidence which represents that copy one another results in the popularity in fashion and in other things and the principal one is nowadays people have high living standards, they purchase expensive goods and another output therefore it encourages other to buy same thing with high cost and nice look. Prior to it, arise economic condition of a region to elucidate it a person who owned bmw car have fame in society, so that this thing demands more commodities from industry for name and fame this make them more productive indirectly it increase the economic position by the help of firm revenue. These are some reasons which show’s that follow each other also uprise the popularity of other things. On the flip side this have some negative impact on society too. Primarly people with poor family background not able to afford it thus they feel dull for their life style. Afterthat due to the trend of western culture folks also want to wear same cloths and other accessories therefore they buy these goods form online or form big shopping mall which adversely effect the local market because native shopkeepers don’t have forign things. These are some bad impacts of this notion on community To recapitulate it, can be seem that the tendency of follow each other among individuals increase the popularity of other fashion and commodities yet it have some bad effect too but according to me this don’t lead impact on the popularity in fashion.
In this materialistic era the trend of western culture on peak due to this
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people
try to adopt their trend no doubt it
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increases
the mindset of a person and able him / her to run with
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current
affairs and this
also
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increase
the
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popularity
of
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other
commodities
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i
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agree
with this statement
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futher
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i
will articulate my points of view on forthcoming paragraphs

At the
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very
outset there are myriad of evidence which represents that copy one another results in the
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popularity
in fashion and in
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other
things and the principal one is nowadays
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people
have high living standards, they
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purchase
expensive
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goods
and another output
therefore
it encourages
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other
to
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buy
same thing with high cost and nice look. Prior to it, arise economic condition of a region to elucidate it a person who
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owned
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bmw
car have fame in society,
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so
that this thing demands more commodities from industry for name and fame this
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make
them more productive
indirectly
it
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increase
the economic position by the
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help
of firm revenue. These are
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some
reasons which
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show
’s that follow each
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other
also
uprise the
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popularity
of
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other
things.

On the flip side
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this have
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some
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negative
impact on society too.
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Primarly
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people
with poor family background not able to afford it
thus
they feel dull for their life style.
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Afterthat
due to the trend of western culture folks
also
want to wear same cloths and
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other
accessories
therefore
they
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buy
these
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goods
form online or form
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big
shopping mall which
adversely
effect the local market
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because
native shopkeepers don’t have
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forign
things. These are
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some
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bad
impacts of this notion on
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community


To recapitulate it, can be
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seem
that the tendency of follow each
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other
among individuals
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increase
the
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popularity
of
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other
fashion and commodities
yet
it
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have
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some
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bad
effect too
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but
according to me
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this don
’t lead impact on the
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popularity
in fashion.
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IELTS essay THE TENDENCY FOR HUMAN BEINGS TO COPY ONE ANOTHER IS SHOWN IN THE POPULARITY OF FASHIONS IN CLOTHES AND OTHER GOODS.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
317 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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