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The table compares the changes in the value of several items from 2016 and 2017.

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The table shows the changes in the value of several items from 2016 and 2017. Overall, it is apparent that exports of equipment are the most lucrative. Similarly, the telecom unit has experienced the greatest change during the two years, considerably outpacing all other products. Equipment sales which reached 15. 6 billion in 2016 and 18. 7 billion in 2017 consistently accounted for almost a third of overall exports in both years, according to the statistics. Telecommunications was the only industry to threaten this dominance in 2018, with exports totaling 14. 3 billion dollars, little more than 23 percent more than Equipment, and a 54 percent increase over 2017. Clothing also had a large gain in value during this time, rising 30% from 5 billion in 2016 to 8 billion in 2017. a Over the same period, only two export commodities exhibited an overall decrease in value. Manufacturing's value fell by 19 percent, from $8. 6 billion to $6. 7 billion. When compared to the clothes industry, the metals sector was struck significantly worse, with exports falling from $9. 6 billion to just $5. 8 billion, a 19 percent drop.
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. Manufacturing's
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. When compared to the
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industry, the metals sector
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IELTS essay The table compares the changes in the value of several items from 2016 and 2017.

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