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review of a resort, prices, atmosphere and kitchen

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Finding an holiday resort could be so frustrated. Prices, value for money and location are only few of the variables that every customer need to pay attention. Today I want to share with you my experience in "la Coccinella" a gorgeous resort in the middle of Italy. Located 30 minutes from Florence, la coccinella is surrounded by the stunning Tuscany countryside. An amazing landscape can be admired from the top of the hill where the resort was built. If you are keen on nature, a dozen of trees and flowers warmly welcomed the visitors. The building is an old-fashioned country house of 3 floors. Behind the huge garden, a small pool complete the portrait. Inside the resort, I was pleasantly surprised by the atmosphere. The rooms are pretty modern with a comfortable bed with a cozy wardrobe in the entrance. During my sojourn I had the possibility of trying the little restaurant in the resort. The quality of the food was acceptable with a small selection of typical dishes. To sum up, la coccinella offers a great atmosphere with a beautiful view of the countryside. Although the price is expensive, I surely recommend this resort to all that love staying in a quiet place surrounded by the nature.
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few of the variables that every customer need to pay attention.

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la
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Coccinella
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a gorgeous
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in the middle of Italy.

Located 30 minutes from Florence, la
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coccinella
is surrounded
by the stunning Tuscany countryside. An amazing landscape can
be admired
from the top of the hill where the
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resort
was built
. If you are keen on nature, a dozen of trees and flowers
warmly
welcomed the visitors. The building is an
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old
-fashioned country
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house
of 3 floors. Behind the huge garden, a
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small
pool complete the portrait.

Inside the
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, I was
pleasantly
surprised by the atmosphere. The rooms are pretty modern with a comfortable bed with a cozy wardrobe in the entrance. During my sojourn I had the possibility of trying the
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little
restaurant in the
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. The quality of the food was acceptable with a
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small
selection of typical dishes.

To sum up, la
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coccinella
offers a great atmosphere with a
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beautiful
view of the countryside. Although the price is expensive, I
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to all that
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staying in a quiet place surrounded by the nature.
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IELTS essay review of a resort, prices, atmosphere and kitchen

Essay
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208 words
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