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tell a story start with: Sara was excited about her fantastic costume as she set off to the part.

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Sara was excited about her fantastic costume as she set off to the part. Kate, her best friend, had invited her to her birthday celebration. Sara had carefully prepared for this, as it was her first time attending such an event. Everyone was astonished to see her show up at the party. Actually, Sara looks so pretty like a princess dressing a white evening gown with diamonds high bow-strapped heels. Also, she wore a glittering star necklace around her neck. Suddenly, Kris, the male god of the school, approached and expressed his desire to get acquainted. They greeted each other and talked very well. Not long after, they became a couple that the whole school admired

Sara was excited
 about her fantastic costume as she set off to the part. Kate, her best friend, had invited her to her birthday celebration. Sara had carefully
 prepared for this, as it was her first
 time attending such an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
. Everyone was astonished
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 her This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 up at the party. Actually, Sara looks This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 pretty like a princess dressing a white evening gown with diamonds high bow-strapped heels. Also
, she wore a glittering star necklace around her neck. Suddenly
, Kris, the male god of the school, approached and expressed his desire to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 acquainted. They greeted each other and talked This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. Not long after, they became a couple that the whole school Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphadmired.admired!admired?admired:admired,admired;
admired