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Should people give money as a present?

Should people give money as a present? a7w8V
The time of the holidays is gradually approaching. And all people are tormented by one question. Namely, what to give your loved ones? Most people these days think that money is the best gift. But during the childhood of our parents, it was considered impolite to give money. People who donated money were considered impolite. So who is really right? Let us consider the arguments in favor of buying gifts. Firstly, people with the help of a gift can show how important this person is to them. It's always nice when a person listens to you, notices your interests, takes an interest in you in order to make a gift of your dreams. Such a gift will always delight a person, because attention is always pleasant. Secondly, a gift is a small surprise that is expected. Opening a gift that is intended for you is always exciting, people experience a variety of emotions. What kind of person doesn't like surprises? Of course everyone! On the other hand, there is a strong case for money over a gift. A huge advantage of money in the form of a gift is the saved time, which is already in short supply. Yes, it so happens that there is absolutely no time to go shopping, choose some thing and deal with its design. Another advantage is that donating money is one hundred percent hit. Since not all people are ready to talk about their desires, it can be impossible to find the perfect and desired gift. By donating money, such situations can be avoided. I believe that the choice between money and a gift depends on which person you want to give it to. In most cases, the decision will be based on your relationship. If this person is close to you and he trusts you, then it would be much better to give a gift instead of money, because there is an opportunity to make his dream come true. If the person is not close to you and you are not sure that you know what he will be happy about, then it is better to give money. However, I very rarely give money, I always try to find out the preferences of people. I like to surprise people, I like to please and pleasantly surprise them. For me, the emotional part of the gift is much more important than the time spent.
The
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time
of the holidays is
gradually
approaching. And all
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people
are tormented
by one question.
Namely
, what to
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give
your
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loved
ones? Most
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people
these days
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think
that
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money
is the best
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gift
.
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But
during the childhood of our parents, it
was considered
impolite to
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give
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money
.
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People
who donated
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money
were considered
impolite.
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So
who is
really
right?

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Let
us consider the arguments in favor of buying
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gifts
.
Firstly
,
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people
with the
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help
of a
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gift
can
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show
how
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important
this
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person
is to them. It's always nice when a
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person
listens to you, notices your interests, takes an interest in you in order to
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make
a
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gift
of your dreams. Such a
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gift
will always delight a
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person
,
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because
attention is always pleasant.
Secondly
, a
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gift
is a
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small
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surprise
that is
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expected
. Opening a
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gift
that
is intended
for you is always exciting,
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people
experience a variety of emotions. What kind of
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person
doesn't like
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surprises
?
Of course
everyone!

On the other hand
, there is a strong case for
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money
over a
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gift
. A huge advantage of
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money
in the form of a
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gift
is the saved
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time
, which is already in short supply. Yes, it
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so
happens that there is
absolutely
no
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time
to go shopping, choose
Did you mean "something"?
some thing
and deal with its design. Another advantage is that donating
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money
is one hundred percent hit. Since not all
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people
are ready to talk about their desires, it can be impossible to find the perfect and desired
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gift
. By donating
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money
, such situations can
be avoided
.

I believe that the choice between
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money
and a
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gift
depends on which
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person
you want to
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give
it to.
In most cases
, the decision will
be based
on your relationship. If this
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person
is close to you and he trusts you, then it would be much better to
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give
a
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gift
instead
of
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money
,
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because
there is an opportunity to
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make
his dream
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come
true. If the
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person
is not close to you and you are not sure that you know what he will be happy about, then it is better to
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give
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money
.
However
, I
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very
rarely
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give
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money
, I always try to find out the preferences of
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people
. I like to
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surprise
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people
, I like to
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please
and
pleasantly
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surprise
them. For me, the emotional part of the
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gift
is much more
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
than the
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time
spent.
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IELTS essay Should people give money as a present?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
400 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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