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Advantages and Disadvantages of Watching Television

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Is Television Good or Bad for People? Some people claim that television is the root of all evil, while others think of television as a best friend. Some blame the television for society's violence, consumerism, and misinformation, while others see it as a rich resource for education and global understanding. Who is right? I know many people who just can't seem to live without TV. As soon as they get home, they turn it on. Even if they have work to do, family to be with, or friends to see, they do it all with the TV on. For many of us, television is such a constant presence in our lives that we haven't stopped to question whether or not it is good, and most never ask ourselves if and how television might be hurting us.
Is
Television
Good
or
Bad
for
People
?

Some
people
claim that
television
is the root of all evil, while others
think
of
television
as
a
best friend.
Some
blame the
television
for society's violence, consumerism, and misinformation, while others
see
it as a rich resource for education and global understanding.

Who is right?

I know
many
people
who
just
can't seem to
live
without TV. As
soon
as they
get
home, they turn it on. Even if they have work to do, family to be with, or friends to
see
, they do it all with the TV on. For
many
of us,
television
is such a constant presence in our
lives
that we haven't
stopped
to question whether or not it is
good
, and most never ask ourselves if and how
television
might be hurting us.
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IELTS essay Advantages and Disadvantages of Watching Television

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
136 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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