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The story about Eric and may

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The jobs of the lawyer is represent client, anyway they can suffer charged every guilty even when the fault is ridiculous. Example like thisEric and his lawyer with may and her lawyer already convened put settle one problem. Eric is claiming money from May, but May doesn’t want receive it for him, she had a great reasons. Eric was broken into May’s house to commit robbery and both of act all is crime, security is may house quite good, so the easiest way to get into the house is through a lantern l, a window on kitchen attic. While may is sleeping, a thief is opening lantern and jumping into kitchen. He was fail on bar where has the knife which stick is his thigh, so Eric was went to the hospital and then had throw in jail

The jobs of the lawyer is Consider using a past participle here: "represented".represented
represent
 client, anyway they can suffer charged every guilty even when the fault is ridiculous. Example like Possible spelling mistake found.this Eric
thisEric
 and his lawyer with may and her lawyer already convened put settle one problem. Eric is claiming money from May, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 May doesn’t Probably a preposition is missing after 'want'.want to receive
want receive
 it for him, she had a great reasons. Eric was broken
 into May’s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 to commit robbery and both of act all is crime, security is may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 quite This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the easiest way to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 into the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 is through a lantern l, a window on kitchen attic. While may is sleeping, a thief is opening lantern and jumping into kitchen. He was fail on bar where has the knife which stick is his thigh, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 Eric was Consider using a past participle here: "gone".gone
went
 to the hospital and then had throw in Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphjail.jail!jail?jail:jail,jail;
jail