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The story about Eric and may

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The jobs of the lawyer is represent client, anyway they can suffer charged every guilty even when the fault is ridiculous. Example like thisEric and his lawyer with may and her lawyer already convened put settle one problem. Eric is claiming money from May, but May doesn’t want receive it for him, she had a great reasons. Eric was broken into May’s house to commit robbery and both of act all is crime, security is may house quite good, so the easiest way to get into the house is through a lantern l, a window on kitchen attic. While may is sleeping, a thief is opening lantern and jumping into kitchen. He was fail on bar where has the knife which stick is his thigh, so Eric was went to the hospital and then had throw in jail
The jobs of the lawyer is
represent
client, anyway they can suffer charged every guilty even when the fault is ridiculous. Example like
thisEric
and his lawyer with may and her lawyer already convened put settle one problem. Eric is claiming money from May,
but
May doesn’t
want receive
it for him, she had a great reasons. Eric
was broken
into May’s
house
to commit robbery and both of act all is crime, security is may
house
quite
good
,
so
the easiest way to
get
into the
house
is through a lantern l, a window on kitchen attic. While may is sleeping, a thief is opening lantern and jumping into kitchen. He was fail on bar where has the knife which stick is his thigh,
so
Eric was
went
to the hospital and then had throw in
jail
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IELTS essay The story about Eric and may

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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