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motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems

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However, motorways are a novel formulated lane to expand transportation over all countries. A great number of people argue that developing freeways have a positive effect on the drivers and long distance travelling, while others claim that there are serious problems such as: air pollution  and car accidents. Obviously, This essay will describe the problems involved in motorways and suggest possible solutions. First of all, motorways are major causes of air pollution. The number of  heavy vehicles have increased dramatically over the last years such as lorries and motor trucks because more people used them for business and work on the motorways. The pollution from gas emission that is escapes from cars contributes significantly to climate change. To reduce the effect of  heavy trucks on the environment, while they appear increasingly on the autobahn, governments should spend more money on scientific researches. Scientists must try to find  a different type of fuel which does not  harm the environment as much as. in addition, governments must increase tax on the petroleum companies which produce an non-environmental gasoline. Secondly, motorways are too fast so many people prefer to drive on the motorways rather than city center roads. furthermore, driving high-speed leads to many car accidents on this line transportation in contrast this a good flexibility road during long distance travelling because there is no traffic stop and rush hour. Governments should introduce a digital camera for measuring speed who drive very quickly on  the motorways  and also engage many light symbols to be awareness at any accidents and circumstances. another solution should be a limit the number of cars  allowed to drive on it. In conclusion, although people enjoy driving on the motorways because it helps travel quickly especially travelling for long distances. there are so many accidents on the roads and also there is a danger effect on the environments in life. there are many solutions as above mentioned in the essay, I think  developing more motorways in the suburbs a fantastic aspects in the future.
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argue that developing freeways have a
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effect on the drivers and long distance travelling, while others claim that there are serious problems such as: air pollution
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and
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accidents
.
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describe
the problems involved in motorways and suggest possible solutions.

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, motorways are major causes of air pollution. The number of
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heavy vehicles
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have
increased
dramatically
over the last years such as lorries and motor trucks
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because
more
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people
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used
them for business and work on the motorways. The pollution from gas emission
that is
escapes from
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cars
contributes
significantly
 to climate
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change
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reduce
the effect of
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heavy trucks on the environment, while they appear
increasingly
on the autobahn,
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governments
 should spend more money on scientific researches. Scientists
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must
try to find
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a
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different
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harm the environment as much as.
in addition
,
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governments
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must
increase tax on the petroleum 
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companies
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an
non-environmental gasoline.

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fast
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many
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prefer to drive on the motorways
rather
than city center roads.
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furthermore
, driving high-speed leads to
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many
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car
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accidents
on this line transportation
in contrast
this a
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good
flexibility road during long distance travelling
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because
there is no traffic
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stop
and rush hour.
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Governments
should introduce a digital camera for measuring speed who drive
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very
quickly
on
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the motorways
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and
also
engage
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many
light symbols to be awareness at any
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accidents
and circumstances.
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another
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allowed
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people
enjoy driving on the motorways
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because
it
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helps
travel
quickly
especially
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there
are
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so
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many
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accidents
on the roads and
also
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danger
effect on the environments in life.
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there
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solutions as above mentioned in the essay, I
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developing more motorways in the suburbs a fantastic
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aspects
in the future.
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IELTS essay motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
322 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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