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as soon as i woke up i knew that it was going to be a special day

as soon as i woke up i knew that it was going to be a special day 2arlx

As soon as I woke up I knew that it was going to be my mother’s birthday. She was going to turn to forty so I would have a gift for her. I bought a dress for her but it was old fashioned. So I went to my father’s work place. I asked him about the gift. My father told me to buy anyting. So I backed home and came to a shop by my house. There were many clothes there. After one hear, I finally chose a skirt for her. After that, we celebrated a big party for her and enjoyed it.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as I woke up I knew that it was going to be my mother’s birthday. She was going to turn to forty This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I would have a gift for her. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a dress for her This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it was This word is normally spelled with hyphen.old-fashioned
old fashioned
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I went to my father’s work place. I asked him about the gift. My father This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
Possible spelling mistake found.anythingany ting
anyting
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I backed home and came to a shop by my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. There were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 clothes there. After one hear, I finally
 chose a skirt for her. After that, we celebrated a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 party for her and enjoyed it. 