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the special food in my country

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i love food. there are so many kinds of food in the world. In my country, there are also have many delicious food and one of them i like most is "banh mi". Banh mi is a combination of meat, cucumber, letture, onions and so on. It's very easy to carry. Banh mi is a popular street food in Vietnam. You can see carts selling banh mi on the sidewalk. People can eat banh mi everytime and everywhere. My family also like banh mi too and we usually eat it on every Sunday morning. I think i can eat banh mi at all times of the day. If oneday you come to Vietnam, try it
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IELTS essay the special food in my country

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
114 words
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