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The shopping centre in 1985 and its development in 2005.

The shopping centre in 1985 and its development in 2005. aJq9o

The given pictures illustrate the shopping centre in 1985 and its development in 2005. Overall, the mall has been changed under the contraction and alteration trend over the period of 20 years. Probably, the most noticeable modification is that 6 cinemas in the south concern have been moved into vacant rooms. In the food court, the food stall in the centre has been abated. There were food stalls but it has been replaced into the cafe in the west next to the entrance while the video shop has been transformed into electronics and the deletion of the gift shop on a similar side. Another change was the removal of the fountain in the hub of the north courtyard and the bookstore that was in the middle of women’s clothing and sporting goods in the east of the shopping centre. However, the shopping mall has a number of places that are unaltered. The main entrance and sides doors in directions’ west and east with the department store have not been changed. It still was the women’s clothing, sporting goods shop and a bank with an ATM on the right side while on the left, there were a card shop and the jewellery shop.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 pictures illustrate the shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 in 1985 and its development in 2005. Overall
, the mall has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 under the contraction and alteration trend over the period of 20 years.

Probably
, the most noticeable modification is that 6 cinemas in the south concern have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 into vacant rooms. In the food court, the food stall in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 has been abated
. There were food stalls This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it has been replaced
 into the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 in the west next
 to the entrance while the video You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 has been transformed
 into electronics and the deletion of the gift You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 on a similar side. Another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 was the removal of the fountain in the hub of the north courtyard and the bookstore that was in the middle of women’s clothing and sporting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 in the east of the shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
.

However
, the shopping mall has a number of places that are unaltered
. The main entrance and sides doors in directions’ west and east with the department store have not been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
. It still
 was the women’s clothing, sporting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 and a bank with an ATM on the right side while on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
, there were a card You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 and the Possible spelling mistake. 'jewellery' is British English.jewelry
jewellery
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
. 