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Some people believe that coronavirus can be controlled by staying at home.Do u agri or disagri.

Some people believe that coronavirus can be controlled by staying at home. Do u agri or disagri. oxEJg
There are many controversy in this topics. It is true by follow social distance and stay at home we can control COVID virus. Corona virus is a viral dishes. If we can follow social distance we can control it rapidly. According to the BBC the survey 2000 people thy stay home and controlled corona virus strongly. However, When we stay home our economic conditions will be falling day by day. We notice Pakistaney people lost their job and they are become poor day by day. In conclusion, COVID-19 situation we should stay at home. It helps controlling viruses.
There are
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many controversy
in
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this
topics. It is true by follow social distance and
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stay
at home we can control
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
COVID
virus.
The term "Coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.
Corona virus
is a viral
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dishes
.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
we can follow social distance we can control it
rapidly
. According to the BBC the survey 2000
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people
thy
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stay
home and controlled
The term "coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.
corona virus
strongly
.
However
, When we
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stay
home our economic conditions will be falling day by day. We notice
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Pakistaney
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people
lost their
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job and
they
are become
poor day by day.

In conclusion
, COVID-19 situation we should
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stay
at home. It
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helps
The verb 'helps' is used with an infinitive: "to control" or "control".
controlling
viruses.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that coronavirus can be controlled by staying at home. Do u agri or disagri.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
98 words
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