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Write about why couldn’t go the party and explain what happen

Write about why couldn’t go the party and explain what happen gbY3A
yesterday, I couldn’t went in the party because I felt tired and I sick. I felt nausea and pain in stomach. My sister went to me in the hospital and ask the doctor what state of me. The doctor gave me some medicine and needle to less the pain. When I meet my friend I told her I am sorry about attend the party and I ask her and she told what happen in the party. She said, everybody celebrated about graduation of my university. They were a plenty of food like candy and dessert. I told her the next holiday. It’s doing a lot of things like playing football and dancing together and eat dinner in Indian restaurant.
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yesterday
, I couldn’t
The verb 'couldn't' requires base form of this verb: "go"
went
in the party
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I felt tired and I sick. I felt nausea and pain in stomach. My sister went to me in the hospital and ask the doctor what state of me. The doctor gave me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
medicine and needle to less the pain. When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
my friend I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
her I am sorry about attend the party and I ask
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
her and
she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
what happen in the party. She said, everybody celebrated about graduation of my university. They were a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of food like candy and dessert. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
her the
next
holiday. It’s doing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
things like playing football and dancing together and eat dinner in Indian restaurant.
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IELTS essay Write about why couldn’t go the party and explain what happen

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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