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activities during your freetime

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However, at weekends, I have much free time, so I usually spend it on relaxing to prepare for a coming busy week. First of all, in my free time, I like playing some sports, such as badminton or basketball, with my friends. Sport not only makes me stronger but also connects me with my friends who have the same hobbies. We sometimes go riding in order that we can combine sporting activity and sightseeing.
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, at weekends, I have much free time,
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I
usually
spend it on relaxing to prepare for a coming busy week.
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First of all
, in my free time, I like playing
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some
sports, such as badminton or basketball, with my friends.

Sport not
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only
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makes
me stronger
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but
also
connects me with my friends who have the same hobbies. We
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sometimes
go riding in order that we can combine sporting activity and sightseeing.
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IELTS essay activities during your freetime

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
74 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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