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The SEX of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that.

The SEX of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that. RN07k
In some developed countries, there is a trend of costless healthcare benefits, regardless of the person’s income. I believe that there are some cases where this free medical care facility is disadvantageous to the general public, however, in other aspects it is quite acceptable. Firstly, I will explain how it has negative effects on society, and secondly, the positive side of this scheme will be examined.
In
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some
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developed countries
, there is a trend of
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costless
healthcare benefits, regardless of the person’s income. I believe that there are
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some
cases where this free medical care facility is disadvantageous to the
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general public
,
however
, in other aspects it is quite acceptable.
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, I will
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explain
how it has
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negative
effects on society, and
secondly
, the
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positive
side of this scheme will
be examined
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IELTS essay The SEX of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
66 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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