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The sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? v.1

The sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities. v. 1
Human life is full of challenges and hard decisions. People pass through awful and great moments, the most of them depending on the choices they make. Having a good sense of humor makes all those moments better. This quality makes individuals take the best decisions. This is why is so important in our life. Happiest people tend to have a healthier life, a better social relationship and success in their works and studies. It is widely known the mirth is the best medicine to the stress and the bitterness. Many medic researches are state that laughing helps to keep a healthy hearth and a stable circulatory system. What is more, many psychologists say that humor is the best way to confront the saddest moments in our life. It is a fact that we live in a world where the sadness arrives to us a lot of time, and we need to know how surpass it to keep living. This is why a sense of humor is a quality so important to be a healthy person. Besides, happy people always draw other' s attention. The sense of humor allows them to make friends and preserve a good relationship with them. Individuals who often laugh are always distinguished as polite, smart and positive-mind. These features make them a good company. Last but not least, people with a correct sense of humor have more likelihood to thrive in his job or studies. They used to like challenges to improve themselves and knowing they own limits. That is what makes them successful in what they do. The life' s impediments are not that hard is you confront them with a positive mind. To sum up, for all these reasons I agree that sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities. Our life is not harder thanks to this quality that make us stronger people in the worst situation.
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make
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good
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sense
of
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humor
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makes
all those moments better. This
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quality
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makes
individuals take the best decisions. This is why is
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so
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important
in our
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life
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Happiest
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people
tend to have a healthier
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life
, a better social relationship and success in their works and studies.

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known the mirth is the best medicine to the
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medic researches are state that laughing
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helps
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a healthy hearth and a stable circulatory system.
What is more
,
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many
psychologists say that
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humor
is the best way to confront the saddest moments in our
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life
. It is a fact that we
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live
in a world where the sadness arrives to us
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a lot of
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keep
living. This is why a
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sense
of
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is a
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quality
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so
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to be a healthy person.

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always draw
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allows
them to
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friends and preserve a
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good
relationship with them. Individuals who
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laugh are always distinguished as polite, smart and
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positive
-mind. These features
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them a
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good
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company
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not least,
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with a correct
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of
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humor
have more likelihood to thrive in his job or studies. They
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used
to like challenges to
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improve
themselves and knowing they
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sense
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is one of the most
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important
human
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make
us stronger
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33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Learning is a treasure that will follow its owner everywhere.
Chinese Proverb

IELTS essay The sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
317 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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