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The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this, decline in the quality of life in cities, attempts must be made to encourage people to use their cars less and public transports more. Discuss possible ways to encourage the use of public transport.

The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this, decline in the quality of life in cities, attempts must be made to encourage people to use their cars less and public transports more. Discuss possible ways to encourage the use of public transport. D9ja

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