Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The Republic of Cyprus is a island country in the Mediterranean Sea and member state of the European Union.

The Republic of Cyprus is a island country in the Mediterranean Sea and member state of the European Union. 6N9X8
The Republic of Cyprus is a island country in the Mediterranean Sea and member state of the European Union. Cyprus is in Asia, but it is often associated with Europe because of the culture and history of the people. It is also closer to Africa than to Europe. The capital is Nicosia. Most of the population speaks Greek and Turkish. Cyprus is a popular tourist destination in Europe. In 2019, 4 million tourists visited the country. It is estimated, that Cyprus earned 2. 7 million euros in that year. [4] Tourism is very important to the country, as tourism made up 23% of its economy in 2020. [5] Contents 1 History 2 Geography 3 Politics 4 Districts 5 Cities 6 Related pages 7 References 8 Other websites History Mycenaeans of Ancient Greece were the first inhabitants of the island. Archaeological evidence shows that Greek settlement began in c. 1400 BC. [6] It represents the first advanced and distinctively Greek civilization in mainland Greece with its palatial states, urban organization, works of art, and writing system. Cyprus is the only place outside England where an English royal wedding took place. That was the wedding of Richard I and Berengaria of Navarre on 12 May 1191. [7][8] Cyprus gained independence from the British Empire in 1960. The UK, Turkey and Greece became guarantor powers of the island. In July 1974, Turkey invaded Cyprus. Since then the northern part of the island has been under Turkish occupation. The Turkish Republic of Northern Cyprus became de facto independent in 1983 but it is recognised only by Turkey. When entering by aeroplane, a short stop is made at an airport in mainland Turkey. The present situation with the island split came about because Cyprus, historically Greek, was conquered and became part of the Ottoman Empire from 1570–1914. The British administered it from 1878 until 1960. Likewise, Greece had been part of the Ottoman Empire for several centuries. Negotiations for a unified island have been held several times without success. In 2004, Cyprus joined the European Union. On 1 January 2008 Cyprus adopted the Euro, the single European currency. [9] Although the official currency of Northern Cyprus is the Turkish Lira, many shops accept Euros and British pounds. [10][11]
The Republic of Cyprus is
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
country in the Mediterranean Sea and member state of the European Union. Cyprus is in Asia,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
associated with Europe
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the culture and history of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. It is
also
closer to Africa than to Europe. The capital is Nicosia. Most of the population speaks
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Greek
and Turkish.

Cyprus is a popular tourist destination in Europe. In 2019, 4 million tourists visited the country. It
is estimated
, that Cyprus earned 2. 7 million euros in that year. [4] Tourism is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to the country, as tourism made up 23% of its economy in 2020. [5]

Contents

1 History

2 Geography

3 Politics

4 Districts

5 Cities

6 Related pages

7 References

8 Other websites

History

Possible spelling mistake found.
Mycenaeans
of Ancient Greece were the
first
inhabitants of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
. Archaeological evidence
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Greek
settlement began in c. 1400 BC. [6] It represents the
first
advanced and
distinctively
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Greek
civilization in mainland Greece with its palatial states, urban organization, works of art, and writing system. Cyprus is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
place outside England where an English royal wedding took place. That was the wedding of Richard I and
Possible spelling mistake found.
Berengaria
of Navarre on 12 May 1191. [7][8]

Cyprus gained independence from the British Empire in 1960. The UK, Turkey and Greece became guarantor powers of the island.

In July 1974, Turkey invaded Cyprus.
“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
then the northern part of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
has been under Turkish occupation. The Turkish Republic of Northern Cyprus became de facto independent in 1983
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it is
Possible spelling mistake. 'recognised' is British English.
recognised
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
by Turkey. When entering by
Possible spelling mistake. 'aeroplane' is British English.
aeroplane
, a short
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
is made
at an airport in mainland Turkey.

The present situation with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
split came about
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
Cyprus,
historically
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Greek
,
was conquered
and became part of the Ottoman Empire
Nonstandard phrase. Did you mean: "from 1570 to 1914"?
from 1570–1914
. The British administered it from 1878 until 1960.
Likewise
, Greece had been part of the Ottoman Empire for several centuries. Negotiations for a unified
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
have
been held
several times without success.

In 2004, Cyprus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
the European Union. On 1 January 2008 Cyprus adopted the Euro, the single European currency. [9] Although the official currency of Northern Cyprus is the Turkish Lira,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
shops accept Euros and British pounds. [10][11]
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay The Republic of Cyprus is a island country in the Mediterranean Sea and member state of the European Union.

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
364 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts