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Talk about a time when you solved a problem with the help of the Internet

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I’d like to talk about an issue that I fixed using the internet in particular YouTube just one month ago. I still remember, it was Thursday, I was still working on my assignment to complete it by midnight and everything was working fine. My laptop suddenly crashed and has become completely unresponsive. At that time, I was becoming increasingly exasperated because I haven’t saved my work, I can’t be able to click anywhere on the screen or even access the shut-down option. I was struggling to find a solution to that problem. First, I asked my friend who is tech-savvy, but he didn’t respond. After that, I turn to YouTube for help. I watched loads of videos that were great to the point to resolve the problem. Anyway, I followed every instruction step by step, pausing the video between each stage. I unplug the power cable from the electrical outlet for few minutes then I removed the battery to force the laptop to turn off, I boot up the laptop and within a couple of minutes, my laptop was working and I recovered the unsaved document. Finally, I can’t imagine life without the internet. To be honest, this is a godsend
I’d like to talk about an issue that I
fixed
using the internet
in particular
YouTube
just
one month ago. I
still
remember, it was Thursday, I was
still
working on my assignment to complete it by midnight and everything was working fine. My
laptop
suddenly
crashed and has become completely unresponsive. At that time, I was becoming
increasingly
exasperated
because
I haven’t saved my work, I can’t be able to click anywhere on the screen or even access the shut-down option. I was struggling to find a solution to that problem.

First
, I asked my friend who is tech-savvy,
but
he didn’t respond. After that, I turn to YouTube for
help
. I
watched
loads of videos that were great to the point to resolve the problem.

Anyway, I followed every instruction step by step, pausing the video between each stage. I unplug the power cable from the electrical outlet for few minutes then I removed the battery to force the
laptop
to turn off, I boot up the
laptop
and within a couple of minutes, my
laptop
was working and I recovered the unsaved document.

Finally
, I can’t imagine life without the internet. To be honest, this is a
godsend
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IELTS essay Talk about a time when you solved a problem with the help of the Internet

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  American English
4 paragraphs
200 words
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