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the reasons why nowadays people are giving lower prestige to arts.

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In this essay we will analyse the reasons why nowadays people are giving lower prestige to arts. Art has always been indispensable for the cultures around the world. But suddenly during the last decades art´s importance has decreased considerably by being replaced by other subjects such as science, technology and business. The interest on topics as arts and history has been reduced because of the importance that people from the time being are giving to it. The industrial revolution took a huge curve on the way that life was developing. Humans change their priorities and the ambition of knowledge, especially on science and technology, increases in a big way. Business has always been something important in our daily life and with the rapid development of the last years the progress on the economy has also been enormous. Art has passed to a second plane, it is not something actual that can bring you new knowledge. But what people did not see is that in arts and history you can find and get the information that the individuals who live before us get through their effort and experience. With those learnings we can improve as a society and make things in a better way. For summarise, new topics such as technology and science can help us to discover and know the things that we ignore in the past. But subjects like arts and history can show us the way that people live in the past in order to learn of them and improve, always remembering that arts and history are part of our identity and culture.
In this essay we will
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analyse
the reasons why nowadays
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people
are giving lower prestige to
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arts
.
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Art
has always been indispensable for the cultures around the world.
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But
suddenly
during the last decades
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art´s
importance has decreased
considerably
by
being replaced
by other subjects such as science, technology and business.

The interest on topics as
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arts
and
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history
has been
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reduced
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because
of the importance that
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people
from the time being are giving to it. The industrial revolution took a huge curve on the way that life was developing. Humans
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change
their priorities and the ambition of knowledge,
especially
on science and technology, increases in a
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big
way. Business has always been something
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important
in our daily life and with the rapid development of the last years the progress on the economy has
also
been enormous.

Art has passed to a second
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plane
, it is not something actual that can bring you new knowledge.
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But
what
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people
did not
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see
is that in
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arts
and
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history
you can find and
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get
the information that the individuals who
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live
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before
us
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get
through their effort and experience. With those learnings we can
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improve
as a society and
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make
things in a better way.

For
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summarise
, new topics such as technology and science can
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help
us to discover and know the things that we
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ignore
in the past.
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But
subjects like
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arts
and
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history
can
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show
us the way that
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people
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live
in the past in order to learn of them and
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improve
, always remembering that
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arts
and
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history
are part of our identity and culture.
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IELTS essay the reasons why nowadays people are giving lower prestige to arts.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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