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the reasons and solution of pollution

the reasons and solution of pollution YdqGm

Pollution has some reasons. (speaking/ writing) Firstly, The factories use toxic acidic materials because they produce food/ agricultural products. they send toxic gases to air. So, the air the weather / becomes polluted. Secondly, the advanced countries produce a lot of cars that are bad/ harmful for the weather/ environment. In other words They Are environmentally friendly. But third world countries use a lot of old machines/ cars/ vehicles. So, they pollute the air. In other words, the people have a lot of personal cars. when people use personal cars, there is traffic. Traffic leads to pollution because they send exhaust fumes. The pollution has some solutions. One solution is that the government make public transportation. The people use less personal cars. When there is not traffic, the weather is clear. Another solution is that the factories have heavy industry should be out of the city because they polluted the air. In conclusion, I think if there is not pollution, the people are healthy and so the people and government solve the pollution problem together.

You use this word too often, consider replacing it withabuseinfectioncorruptiondeterioration
Pollution
 has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 reasons. (speaking/ writing)

Firstly
, The factories This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 toxic acidic materials This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they produce food/ agricultural products. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 toxic gases to air. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, the air the weather / becomes polluted.

Secondly
, the advanced countries produce This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 cars that are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
/ harmful for the weather/ environment. In other words
 They Are environmentally
 friendly. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 third world countries This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 machines/ cars/ vehicles. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, they pollute the air. In other words
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 personal cars. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 personal cars, there is traffic. Traffic leads to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withabuseinfectioncorruptiondeterioration
pollution
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 exhaust fumes.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withabuseinfectioncorruptiondeterioration
pollution
 has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 solutions.

One solution is that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 public transportation. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 less personal cars.

When there is not traffic, the weather is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
.

Another solution is that the factories have heavy industry should be out of the city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they polluted the air.

In conclusion
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 if there is not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withabuseinfectioncorruptiondeterioration
pollution
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are healthy and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 solve the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withabuseinfectioncorruptiondeterioration
pollution
 problem together. 