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the reason of the year you like best

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A year have 4 season: Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter, The most of reason i like best is Winter. This is the reason of love. Catholic side, we usually call Winter in another name is Noel or Christmas because on December 24th is the date Jesus was born, this is a big celebrate in Catholicism. In that day, we usually go to the church, after had gone to the church, we came home and gathered around family tray. We enjoy that moment together, we tell each other stories, telling jokes. Most of people spend this time for their family. They gives each other best wishes, some peopel also gives each other present. I think this is the most of best reason in year.
A year have 4
Possible agreement error. The noun 'season' seems to be countable, so consider using: "seasons".
season
: Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter, The
Consider using "most reason" or "most of the reason".
most of reason
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
like best is Winter. This is the reason of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
. Catholic side, we
usually
call Winter in another name is Noel or Christmas
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
on December 24th is the date Jesus
was born
, this is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
celebrate in Catholicism. In that day, we
usually
go to the church, after had gone to the church, we came home and gathered around family tray. We enjoy that moment together, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
each other stories, telling jokes. Most of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
spend this time for their family. They
Possible agreement error -- use base form here: "give".
gives
each other best wishes,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
Possible spelling mistake found.
peopel
also
gives each other present. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
this is the
Consider using "most best" or "most of the best".
most of best
reason in year.
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IELTS essay the reason of the year you like best

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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