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Some online shops are frauds

Some online shops are frauds 96gK7
Even though the majority of online shops are legit, there are still some websites that claim to be online stores while instead, they are a kind of fraud. Sometimes the items delivered may not have the exact quality as they were displayed on the website and you might just lose your money in case you order in those fake stores. Therefore, it might be a good idea to rely on trustworthy and established online shops instead of online stores you never heard of in order to avoid getting ripped off.
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shops are legit, there are
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websites that claim to be
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stores while
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, they are a kind of fraud.
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Sometimes
the items delivered may not have the exact quality as they
were displayed
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lose your money in case you order in those fake stores.

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good
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to rely on trustworthy and established
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online
shops
instead
of
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stores you never heard of in order to avoid getting ripped off.
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IELTS essay Some online shops are frauds

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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