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The reading and the passage are indicating advantages and disadvantages of teamwork; in other words, they look at teamwork from their view; both of them are trying to illustrate their point of views about doing an affair individually or in a group.

The reading and the passage are indicating advantages and disadvantages of teamwork; in other words, they look at teamwork from their view; both of them are trying to illustrate their point of views about doing an affair individually or in a group. XGo98
The reading and the passage are indicating advantages and disadvantages of teamwork; in other words, they look at teamwork from their view; both of them are trying to illustrate their point of views about doing an affair individually or in a group. Although passage emphasizes a team will be more successful, the professor has another view. In his perspective, its drawbacks are more than when someone performs anything individually. To begin with, the passage alludes to a team will be more high-powered and speedy due to their members' ability which will be shared among others. On the other hand, the professor believes when you assign responsibilities to a group, some of the members do not participate in making decisions and putting the team in progress path. they are just as a 'free ride' who want to gain from the probable success of their team. If so, there is a cruelty to real contributors' rights because they play an important role in succeeding for their team but prosperity is just for the team, not the active members particularly. In the second place, the passage claims that participating in making decisions give a satisfactory feeling to the group members who are working on their own optional work, not an obligatory one. but the professor asserted that making decisions in some groups last a long time by reason of their conflicts which make achieving a consensus so difficult. last but not least, the passage alleges that a group is a place where the members have an opportunity to shine and affect decision-making; however, the professor states that in group decision-making, there are some people who are so influential. when they disagree with a project or a way chosen by group members, that project or way will omit from group plan despite the fact that some members have another view and believe they should keep on their trying.
The reading and the
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are indicating advantages and disadvantages of teamwork;
in other words
, they look at teamwork from their
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view
; both of them are trying to illustrate their point of
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views
about doing an affair
individually
or in a
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group
. Although
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passage
emphasizes a
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team
will be more successful, the
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professor
has another
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view
. In his perspective, its drawbacks are more than when someone performs anything
individually
.

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begin
with, the
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alludes to a
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will be more high-powered and speedy due to their members' ability which will
be shared
among others.
On the other hand
, the
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professor
believes when you assign responsibilities to a
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group
,
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some of the
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do not participate in making decisions and putting the
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team
in progress path.
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they
are
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as a 'free ride' who want to gain from the probable success of their
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team
. If
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, there is a cruelty to real contributors' rights
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because
they play an
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important
role in succeeding for their
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prosperity is
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for the
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, not the active
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members
particularly
.

In the second place, the
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claims that participating in making decisions give a satisfactory feeling to the
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group
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members
who are working on their
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own
optional work, not an obligatory one.
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but
the
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professor
asserted that making decisions in
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some
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groups
last a long time by reason of their conflicts which
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make
achieving a consensus
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so
difficult.

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last
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not least, the
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alleges that a
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is a place where the
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members
have an opportunity to shine and affect decision-making;
however
, the
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professor
states that in
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group
decision-making, there are
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some
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people
who are
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influential.
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when
they disagree with a project or a way chosen by
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group
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, that project or way will omit from
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group
plan despite the fact that
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some
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members
have another
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view
and believe they should
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keep
on their trying.
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IELTS essay The reading and the passage are indicating advantages and disadvantages of teamwork; in other words, they look at teamwork from their view; both of them are trying to illustrate their point of views about doing an affair individually or in a group.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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