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The reading and the lecture is concern about the possibilities of four-day workweek but both contrast each other.

The reading and the lecture is concern about the possibilities of four-day workweek but both contrast each other. 2bPdJ

The reading and the lecture is concern about the possibilities of four-day workweek but both contrast each other. The reading thinks that four-day work will help the employee, the company, and the economy but the lecturer of the lecture does not think this way. First of all, the reading states that the shorten workweek will beneficial for the companies and economy. It will save money and the employee will feel rested and will fewer costly errors as it will prevent overwork. But the lecture argues that in this way, the cost of spending will increase as the company has to spend more on training, health care, and supply. Besides, the company will need more working space and computers, hence, decrease profits. Secondly, the reading states that four-day workweek will decrease the unemployment rate and create more job for others. But, the professor states that this unemployment problem will not adjust in this way as the expanse of hiring will increase. The professor also proposed an alternative solution for this problem like overtime to make up the compensation. Finally, the author also states that it will increase the quality of life of an individual employee as they will able to spend more time with their family and personal matters. whereas the lecturer agrees with the reading about the personal time but he also thinks that it would not help to increase the quality of life, will be late in the workplace and these employees are more likely to lay off in the economic downward. In Conclusion, although the reading and the lecture both talk about the four-day of the workweek, however, the three main points made in the reading are effectively challenged by the lecturer.

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reading
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdiscourseinstructionaddress
lecture
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is
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but
 both contrast each other. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccountknowledgelessonstudyversionexamination
reading
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonsassumesbelievesconsiders
thinks
 that four-day work will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employee
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
, and the economy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the lecturer of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdiscourseinstructionaddress
lecture
 does not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 this way.

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First of all
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccountknowledgelessonstudyversionexamination
reading
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states
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the shorten
 workweek will beneficial for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 and economy. It will save money and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employee
 will feel rested and will fewer costly errors as it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 overwork. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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lecture
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increase
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company
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 spend more on training, health care, and supply. Besides
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 will need more working space and computers, hence
, decrease profits.

Secondly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccountknowledgelessonstudyversionexamination
reading
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states
 that four-day workweek will decrease the unemployment rate and create more job for others. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, the professor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcase
states
 that this unemployment problem will not adjust in this way as the expanse of hiring will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentraisemergerhikeriseupsurge
increase
. The professor also
 proposed an alternative solution for this problem like overtime to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 up the compensation.

Finally
, the author also
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states
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increase
 the quality of life of an individual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employee
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will able
 to spend more time with their family and personal matters. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhereas
whereas
 the lecturer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesces
agrees
 with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccountknowledgelessonstudyversionexamination
reading
 about the personal time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonsassumesbelievesconsiders
thinks
 that it would not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentraisemergerhikeriseupsurge
increase
 the quality of life, will be late in the workplace and these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employees
 are more likely to lay off in the economic downward.

In Conclusion
, although the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccountknowledgelessonstudyversionexamination
reading
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdiscourseinstructionaddress
lecture
 both talk about the four-day of the workweek, however
, the three main points made in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccountknowledgelessonstudyversionexamination
reading
 are effectively
 challenged by the lecturer. 