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The reading and the lecture are both about buzzing, an adverisement strategy.

The reading and the lecture are both about buzzing, an adverisement strategy. DNyE6
The reading and the lecture are both about buzzing, an adverisement strategy. The author of the reading presents three theories about why buzzing is controversial. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the reading. He claims that buzzing has no bad aspect. According to the reading, buzzers mislead customers by giving them incorrect informations. The specific argument is challenged by the author. He claims that buzzers do not provide incorrect informations. Furthermore, he goes on to say that buzzers normally use the product before talking with customers about that and he gives correct informations from his experience. Secondly, the author mentions that people believe all the claims of buzzers about the product. The lecturer, however, asserts that consumers critically judge the buzzer. As like TV ads, They do not believe all the talk of buzzer about the product. Finally, the author mentions that buzzers only work for good quality products. Besides, their shared informations are genuine. So, there is no chance that of losing trusts on buzzers. This directly contradicts what the author indicates.
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and the lecture are both about buzzing, an
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adverisement
strategy. The
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author
of the
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presents three theories about why buzzing is controversial.
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lecturer disputes the
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claims
made in the
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reading
. He
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claims
that buzzing has no
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bad
aspect.

According to the
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reading
, buzzers mislead customers by giving them incorrect
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informations
. The specific argument
is challenged
by the
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author
. He
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claims
that buzzers do not provide incorrect
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informations
.
Furthermore
, he goes on to say that buzzers
normally
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use
the product
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before
talking with customers about
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that and
he gives correct
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informations
from his experience.

Secondly
, the
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author
mentions that
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people
believe all the
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claims
of buzzers about the product. The lecturer,
however
, asserts that consumers
critically
judge the buzzer. As like TV ads, They do not believe all the talk of buzzer about the product.

Finally
, the
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author
mentions that buzzers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
work for
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good
quality products.
Besides
, their shared
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informations
are genuine.
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So
, there is no chance that of losing trusts on buzzers. This
directly
contradicts what the
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author
indicates.
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IELTS essay The reading and the lecture are both about buzzing, an adverisement strategy.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
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5.0
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